| Reviews for Youkai In The Mirror |
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| the-real-Inu-Girl chapter 54 . 11/1 The first words out of my mouth as I binge read your doc over the past 3 days and finally reaching your lastest chapter was, drumroll please, SON OF A BITCH! Oh how I love this story! It’s exhilarating and filled with so much emotion! I can’t keep a straight face as I read, so I tried my best to not read in public or while I was at work. I am so happy and sad that I caught up because I didn’t want to stop reading. I love how you incorporated the feel of the regular anime/manga with the characters and objects and retold it as your own. Amazing. I cannot wait for more, my anxiety is like through the roof I seriously need to calm down lol I have so many feelings because like Sango is going through some shit and mutha fuckin just EVERYTHING! I just don’t even know anymore. I was talking so much as I was reading that I’m now speechless. Ohhh but I cannot WAIT for some more inukag fluff and stuff, know what I’m sayin amazing job! I look forward to many more chapters to come! |
| sandywai chapter 54 . 10/27 Omg Found this fanfiction from a fanarts of Inu/kag that I like and I was already hooked on this story immediately I really like it! Are you gonna update it in the future? Hope you can continue this story. Looking forward to it |
| chapter 54 . 10/21 Found this in my saved, never read it until this week, love love love it! I'm annoyed at some of the details being changed (literally just colors XD Kogas eyes are blue and the wolves eyes aren't yellow, the demons nor the regular wolves lol) shippos tail is cream not red, kagomes eyes as well as kikyos are brown not blue lol that's really all of my complaints XD COME BACK THOUGH! It's already October and this was updated in JULY! Lol |
| HalethN chapter 54 . 10/14 Continuara la historia?, Es genial, necesita continuación! |
| chapter 52 . 10/13 Small errors/continuity: - Ignore if this is a manga thing, but InuYasha's necklace is actually five beads in between each fang and six fangs total - I'm confused as to how Koga and them were able to hold InuYasha at all. When he first chained InuYasha he said he couldn't get closer or else it would chain him too because it works on youkais. When he pulled Kagome away from kissing InuYasha I assumed maybe he just didn't get too close (like he leaned forward until he could just reach her rather than went to get her). But now they're physically on InuYasha and nothing happened. They weren't chained. Was he initially lying to her or is it a continuity error? I AM SO HAPPY WE'RE BACK TO INUYASHA AND KAGOME AND AAAAHHHHHH THE CONVERSATION BETWEEN KAGOME AND KOGA GAVE ME LIIIIFFFEEE! The way she was adamant against his every argument (He'll have a home with ME. I'LL accept him. I LOVE HIM) EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! AND HE'S BACK! INUYASHA IS FINALLY BACK! And it speaks volumes to how little the wolves knew of InuYasha for Koga to not know his eyes aren't SUPPOSED to be red. He's back! He's back! AND HIS FIRST WORD WAS HER NAME! THE FEEEEELLLS! |
| Seaberrie chapter 54 . 10/11 PLEASE UPDATE THIS I NEED MORE! |
| chapter 51 . 10/11 Small error: - When Sango mentions there's "two or three" Naraku demons on the field, it hits the ear wrong because two and three are small enough numbers that you can identify by sight without consciously counting. To have an uncertainty or estimate it should be a number larger than 5 because you dont immediately know the amount without consciously counting (it's more common and understandable to hear someone say there was 5 or 6 for ex). Consider changing to larger numbers or alternatively edit the dialogue to something like "There were two-no, three of them..." as it gives the visible possibility that one stepped out from behind another or something, explaining the inaccuracy of the initial number. -After the battle, when her parents approach it says both of their lips are blue but then when her dad is putting the mom into the bath Sango sees her dad's lips START to turn blue - When her dad asks "Who's your friend?" The quotation marks are missing after the word friend. THIS WAS HEARTBREAKING! Oh my God for her parents to find out this way about Kohaku (mirroring the show), for her to nearly die so many times AND GET SO PHYSICALLY CLOSE TO KOHAKU but it all went wrong, for Miroku to fight so hard, knowing what a risk he's taking on himself, to that bathroom scene where her mother is half dead and her father so mournful and she had to LEAVE THEM. AND leave them in the dark! Oh God my heart... |
| chapter 50 . 10/11 Small typos: - "She was freezing, and he hadn't noticed it at all" should be "she hadn't" not he. - "The quirk returned her his lips. 'Just appreciating art where I find it.'" Should be "returned to his lips" I love how her dream reflected his scent, the light and droplets for amber and the trees for spice. That was beautiful. And classic Miroku with his horrible timing and groping xD I enjoyed those moments of light comedy. Neither the reason he was distracted, his ogling her, or the grope was forced for comedic effect, which is appreciated (that it wasnt forced). It's so much better when they happen naturally. |
| chapter 49 . 10/11 Things are getting crazy at work so it's slowing down my reading. My initial gut reaction was "NOOO WAIT WHAT ABOUT INUKAG?! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!" lol but it's still an awesome chapter and good to see how these guys are doing. IS Sango starting to feel something for Hojo? I feared as much before but it would make sense considering all she's been through. I wonder if that's what she's pushing back. Jealousy that Kagome "has" Hojo but loves someone else when Hojo could be with Sango instead? Fascinating. And I love how flawlessly you write everyone's inner thoughts and narrating style to mirror their personalities. It's amazing and really makes me sink into the story! |
| HalethN chapter 5 . 10/10 Que buena historia! |
| Madwren chapter 54 . 10/9 Lord I need more of this. I just blew through the entire story in a matter of day and please please update when you can️️️ I cannot begin to tell you how much I love your depiction of the characters. Although I've wanted to punch Sango a few times... Keep at it! |
| chapter 53 . 10/8 OmG! Please tell me you are still writing this because this is truly amazing! |
| chapter 54 . 10/8 By far the most beautifully written piece of art ive ever read. You are so unbelievably talented and you can describe a scene so perfectly you can feel like youre there. You captured raw emotion so gracefully I just cant believe it. 100/10. Keep being amazing you absolute creative genius! |
| chapter 54 . 10/7 This is the best thing I've read in a long time! Please keep writing! |
| chapter 54 . 10/7 OMG! Please i need a new chapter now! I love your story! |