Reviews for A Proper Ending
chapter 1 . 8/8
Totally awesome! Way better than how the movie ended.
DevaStrophicGuy chapter 1 . 6/15
Now this is a good Bagi fanfic. And that's saying something since there isn't many fanfics out there, or good ones.
chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
Definitely a better ending :D. Hate the 'bad' one wasn't satisfying and left me on edge.
shamedwolf34 chapter 1 . 4/10/2016
lol Adorable. XD
chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
you know after reading that reading made me want to read one about a guy screwing a pregnant anthro fluttershy but there are none around think you write one buddy?
chapter 1 . 6/18/2015
This was a wonderful ending.

Even though the original is kinda sad, I don't think that that's the end of it. After all, it took both of them several years to reunite so maybe one day they will see each other again. That is what I think should be the true ending.
MarioDS01 chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
I could actually see that ending happening and yes it is a lot better then the sad original one. It would be nice to have a sequel to this, even if just a fanfic.
twilightnite13 chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
I agree this is a proper ending...I thought how the movie ended was sad as well...
slayer911 chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
this has to be the best ending EVER ! Seen the movie and the ending and all that , and should have DEFINITELY ended like this . Thanks for writing man , and awesome pic by the way .
chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
And a question please.. How can I see other people's reviews here? Email me your reply at thanks
chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
You sir.. Truly understand, if it wasn't for you, I probably would have written my own fanfic and it would have been just like this one, I seriously hated how the real movie ended, reading this made me feel so much better though, I know this is much, but one day, I'd like to see someone make they're own fanmade version of the movie recreated like this, but of course, this is still enough for now. Thank you, I really enjoyed reading this
chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
now this is a proper ending!
AlexanderMugetsu chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Why didn't the movie end THIS way?

This is how it should have ended. Good fic.
Fierce Dities Link chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
This ending is so perfect! XD
Thank you for writing it, this is definitely how it should have ended! I love it so much!
Determined-OverLord Wang-Yu chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
This Is Definitely Better Than The Original Ending.

GOOD LUCK!
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