I like it

I like this story :3

That was an epic story and can't wait for the next chapter

Awesome pllzzzzzz finish it

Le meow is all I can say

Good for a lemon

Amazing

Maybe more?

That was nice

wow just wow

This was pretty romantic. Nice!

Ok ... unexpected and by that i mean by what tsubaski did after only one day of black star claming her as his girlfriend well any ways... ( looks at corner) crona ?!

Crona: yes

Rioter: why you here

Crona: hiding

Rioter: from who exactly

Crona: patty

Rioter: Okkkkkkkkk? Why

Crona: shes trying to kiss me ( huddles closer to corner)

Rioter: and thats bad how?

Crona: cause i like her but cant tell her.

Rioter: just two things then one where were you in this story

Crona: with maka after she got the cold.

Rioter: ok last thing PATTTY CRONAS IN HERE.
fid you know im a douche? (Laughs as patty bursts through door and kisses cronas lips.)
Well thatts all see y (tackeled by cronas as he punches Rioter)

I. love. the. story. This might be my first review ever since I joined fanficion. (even thought, I feel a little embarrassed that it had to be a M story *blushes*) I really liked the beginning and how Soul always interrupted their beautiful moments. (can you imagine how pissed off Black star would be, if Soul would have showed up at their house while their were...ummm... "playing around, a game I like to call "Let's discover each other xD" ?)

Anyways, for me it was well written and there was a nice flow even if there were some time jumps. U.U

And the last part, (I'm sure you're annoyed by now, ehehe, it would be funny if you would read it with Excalibur's voice xDDD *laughs*) from all the other stories here on fanfiction this was the one that, I liked the most. (regarding Tsubaki and Black star, of course.) Such a shame that it was only 2 chapters :(

hahaha very good make another chapter of them ! good work.

that was good