considering Neal doesnt sit in the back i'd like to point out child saftey doesnt work on passenger side doors only in the back of the vehicle.

Love it! :)

Great story! Loved it :)

pretty good

LOVED IT!

A wonderful story. To be honest, I HATE that phrase.

LOL at the child-proof lock!

Well done, Jackilee. Well written, good story, and I sure wanted to slap Peter upside the head.

Very nice. The fall out between Neal an Peter was very intense. Poor Neal was bearing his pain so bravely .

And I am very glad that you made up a happy ending. I love happy endings...

"There is some truth to that, you know." Neal replied.

Diana looked at the painting Neal had on his easel which displayed a variety of brush strokes and was very colorful. She turned and looked at him.

"Then what does this say about you?" Diana asked, grinning.

Neal looked at her then quickly turned the painting over. "It's not true of every painting."

HAHAHA! awesome! i loved this! you balanced whump with humor. great job!

Loved the child proof lock bit! Well done!

that's THE END?! I want peter and neal to make up! please continue! i'm begging!

Such a good angst story. Not many people can write good WC peter/neal angst. I love Diana at the end! NO errors I could find, well done!

Oh, is exactly what I was looking for. Thank you for had shared. I loved it. :)

good