Really good story, very entertaining! D'you know, I didn't actually mean to read it just yet? I clicked on the link and was GOING to save it in my bookmarks to read later, but I sorta accidentally read the first couple of paragraphs? The next thing I know, I'm six chapters in and I have new plans for the evening XD

Wow! What a fantastic, original, well-written story! I loved how true you were to the SG-1 characters, especially the complicated relationship of jack and sam. My heart broke with Jack's when clone Carter asked her to officiate the wedding, I cursed shanhan's name (again) as Sam languished in a retirement home and cheered when The Asgard came to take her out.

I loved your treatment of Sam's leg. Although I would have loved to have seen her whole, the story arc around it was really good. The scene with the SGC ladies pulling out emergency supplies was bloody brilliant. Accommodations galore for those gals!

Finally, although the shipper in me really wanted to see how you'd write a jack/sam kiss, the storyteller in me loved your last chapter. I am so glad I discovered this gem of a story. Thank you for sharing!

Love it! Awesome story!

Nice story ... Though it dragged in several places. Concept was really good, and played out nicely. Heroism is too skewed, however ... All powerhouse thinking by Sam Carter alone, leaving the rest to be as wusses. That part I had a hard time with. Even Jack, who started out as promising and brilliant as a well-trained soldier in the first part of the story, detriorated heavily into a "Please save us, Carter, only you can do it" kind of guy, and it didn't sit very well with me.

You did a really good job. Superb!

Aw... Poor Jack! His life is so complicated! lol

[quote]'Stunned at seeing him alive and well after months spent thinking he was dead, Carter could do nothing but gape right at him, her face showing positive astonishment. Then the next thing Jack knew, she shrieked, "Clone!" and sent a mighty whack right at his head with her right crutch.'[/quote]

Oh my gosh! That was hilarious! I almost fell off my chair laughing!

GREAT job! I can't believe I never thought of Baal doing something like this. It really is right up his alley, and he did have the technology. I loved the women in the prison cell. Again, how come I never thought of that. Thank you so much.

Awwwww! Sad it's over.
Loved it. Thanks for the ride. :)

i really enjoyed the story and would love to see a follow up further exploring j and s fledgling relationship.

Oh I really do hope that you will put up a epilogue :) cause I think that, eventhough this is a good ending to the story, it's not completely finished yet :) but hey that is my opinion hahaha. Really enjoyed reading this story.

Great ending, simply thought this was a just the perfect ending. Love Jack/Sam stories and you made this one just wonderful. Thanks for sharing this nice long story. Happy holidays to you.

Wonderful story. Sad to see it end. A little confused Hammond told Jack he was cloned and the Doc caught that it was a clone of Jack because of his arm not showing the break? Ba'al couldn't clone Jack? Loved the story Thanks.

Ah! a happy ending

A very inciteful chapter. Loved the conversation between Jack, Teal'c, and Daniel. So looking forward to next chapter. And, if Pete doesn't allow the divorce, Thor should put him in an air-lock and shoot him back to Earth.