No no no. Chapter 2 can't just be a one shot. I want to read more of this idea you had. I'm interested in seeing how Neal will raise Henry. I want to see how Emma will react to finding out Neal adopted their child, especially if she figures out he saw her when she was pregnant and in jail. I want to know the person Henry will be seeing that he will have a different upbringing. This is too interesting to leave as a one shot.

I love it. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

I love this please keep writing this is exactly what i wanted

Love this one!

wonderful story

Not bad. I enjoyed all the different takes on the way Henry's life could have panned out. I suggest that you proofread your chapters though; there's a lot of awkward syntax and a number of grammatical errors that detract from the story.

For example: the word plus doesn't really work outside of addition. Try 'also' or 'that and' or some other conjunctive derivative. You especially seem to have comma issues; you either don't have them where they should be or put them where a semicolon should have gone.

Awww :D

Awwww solo cute when he talked to Emma. Henry I mean :)

That was adorable and perfect!:)

this is so wonderful. so sad to see it go, but excited for a christmas one :)

Awe! That was beautifully done , the whole story was lovely :)

Cute last chapter! The whole story was adorable!

Omg sooooo cute!

Awe, lovely chapter

So sweet!