It's great bruth

I don't support this pairing (long live Bubbline!) But it was hot, regardless. Well written. Good job :o

Good.

This is an amazing work. Its spurred me to write my own lemon involving those two. I adore the way this was written, is fluidity and choice of words. I only read lemons and seeing as this was far from smut, its the best I have ever read. Please, if you will, create another lemon. Thank you for writing this masterpiece among lemons.

aww. it's nice to find something that's written well, even if it is lemon. thank you for this contribution, hope to see more in the future, lemon or not.

Niceeeee :)

This is one of the better written lemons on this site, particularly in that it goes a simple sexual connection. You did an excellent job on that. Good work.

Wow that was amazing, best NSFW I've read for this couple. Please write more with Finn and Marceline, they're harder to find then most Adventure Time couples, and it's great that there is someone who can write NSFW for them this amazing! Again loved it! Keep it up!

I have no objections I thought it was really good keep up the good work

Amazing

That was pretty outstanding as far as nsfw stuff goes, guess I'll have to read your other works now

That was pretty well written for smut considering my favorite parts was the not sex stuff, great work.

This is really AWESOME!

This was so beautiful. You're such a great writer! I'm in tears right now it was so so beautiful and romantic as well as hot hehe !

Awwww. .