Loved this! Great job!

You know, you coooouuld make Fili, Kili and Thorin NOT related in Your version if you wanted. Just saying. But regardless, very nicely done!

Is there going to be a part three? I would like it very much if there was. It would be very interesting to read.

This was incredible! I really enjoy your style of writing. And I definitely wouldn't mind seeing Thorin give it to Bilbo ;)

loved it!

Wow, good job! I was a bit harsh, what Thorin did to Fili and Kili but a good idea for those two trouble markers need to learn from their mistakes! And I wanted to pitch an idea out for you if you ever do a Cycle Part 3. If Thorin spanks Bilbo, what do you think about if being over the barrel escape? Thorin could be mad at Biblo about that. It's your call but just want to give you an idea if you do another one :) Good story and I hope to see more! :)

amarth taur! I swear I can't tell you how much I love it! I have to say, I would love to see Bilbos reaction to just getting one stroke from it! weather it as a punishment or curiosity on his part, I really hope there will be a Part 3!

OMG THAT WAS AN AMAZING FIC! I simply adore and love it... out of all the Thilbo FFs I have read I realize instantly that this is my FAVORITE THILBO FIC OF ALL TIME! OMG IT WAS JUST UNLIKE ANY OTHER!
I think the characters we're well writen, I can see Thorin and Bilbo both acting that way. It wasnt aggressive, but it wasnt so soft that it fake playfulness. Both giving each other the cold shoulder I feel fits, again, both of their character. I think they are most likely to do that then yell at one another, after all Bilbo is extremely soft and warm hearted and Thorin one you become part of the 'family' is also extremely caring; of course still firm when he needs be. I highly agree about your statement about hobbits being feminine, I feel that as well. Weather that is because they are warm hearted and kind or because of another reason, it just seems that way doesn't it?
*Smiles* Thank you for gracing us readers and fellow writers with this fic, it was far better then words can explain. Please write more

Mmm really liked it. im a bit sad these are your only two Hobbit stories. I am actually hoping you'll write that third part with Bilbo over Thorins knee! Not with the switch I think that would kill him, but with Thorins hand maybe. *Crosses fingers*

Hey I liked both parts of this series, even if I have to admit that the first was in my opinion slightly better. I would really enjoy it if you would write a third story, perhaps with bilbo at the recieving end ? ;)

Oh pleas write part three I really enjoyed the last two XD

Loved it!

LOVE IT!