Poor plot with retarded canon Naruto. This isnt manga for 12 year olds, such a protagonist isnt compelling.

Also, Naruto appeared without clothes, yet he had ryo to try and pay for clothes? Did he pull the money out of his ass?

Transformation doesnt dispell with a bump. Stoped reading there.

Dont like the plot, nor the canon Naruto.

I love the story it has a great narrative and i like the character growth naruto has gone through

you dumbass naruto could easily get out and mind control hello kyubi and the seal and shadow clones when he earlier escaped you idiot

in other words in your plot Kurama is probably barely alive if he didn't get sucked out of Naruto when he created that worm hole or teleportation or w/e the fuck it was. Hell there's no way that Naruto's DNA can be used by anyone else considering his chakra is completely toxic (hell probably his blood to) since he's had Kurama sealed in him since he was no more than an hour old

uhm wouldn't Kurama actually BLOCK Gorgon from even attempting to go through Naruto's head?

so did Naruto drop the scroll or did it get burned up like his suit as you weren't really clear about what happened to the scroll. Also while I'm willing to give this a chance I really dislike stories where Naruto suddenly disappears into another world before he's had ANY REAL training considering as he is now even the weakest of the Marvel Comic/MCU villains would absolutely destroy Naruto in SECONDS

shit fic don't read

This is a dumb!Naruto fanfic.

Good story. A bit too realistic but the plot is interesting. Keep writing!

Err if he is bare ass na k ed how he got his currency to try buy clothes?

Shitfic.

I'm out.

haha funny. though I might have used a little bit more of that spidey's porky mouth

and nobody should get hold of his blood etc its just plot destroying and cliche..