| Reviews for Journey into the Uncertain |
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   Sha Sha Bella chapter 1 . 12/10/2017 Please make more |
| Sha Sha Bella chapter 3 . 12/10/2017 Of course! |
| Sha Sha Bella chapter 2 . 12/10/2017 I think it's quite wonderful! |
| Bteam chapter 6 . 4/21/2015 PWEASE continue |
| Echo chapter 6 . 5/30/2014 WRITE MORE PLZ! |
| Consulting Moose-Lord chapter 6 . 8/5/2013 Gah! Please, find the time! Go hunting for that time to update pleeeeease! |
| Consulting Moose-Lord chapter 5 . 8/5/2013 I like how you're expanding on the little tidbits given in the book. Just one little constructive comment-thingie: your sentences are kinda all the same length, so a little bit more variety would be nice. Fantastic job otherwise! |
| Consulting Moose-Lord chapter 3 . 8/5/2013 So this is a pre-vampire Henry! Awesome! |
| Consulting Moose-Lord chapter 1 . 8/5/2013 Father wants her to marry someone, doesn't love him, wants to run away, BOOM EXPECTING A CHILD |
| Bellz chapter 6 . 7/12/2013 I love the story! Please write more soon! That mention of Crowley made me smile, but that's because whenever I hear the name Crowley, I think of demon Crowley from Supernatural, who I just love for some reason. Maybe it's because he kissed Bobby and took a pic of it. Anyway, please please please write more! |
| In Pieces chapter 6 . 2/18/2013 Lovely chapter! They're finally at Roanoke Island! I'm sensing drama and havoc coming up. Keep it up! |
| In Pieces chapter 5 . 2/11/2013 Wonderful chapter! Keep it up! |
| In Pieces chapter 4 . 2/5/2013 Lovely! Havoc is starting to rise in Lyon, I'm so excited to see what's next in their adventurous and tragic journey. I loved the last line, it was extremely sweet. No problem! Your story definitely deserves more reviews. |
| In Pieces chapter 3 . 2/3/2013 Loved it! The mention of Crowley made me shudder, I can't wait to read the mishaps he will cause later on. I thought it was sweet to show that vulnerable side of Henry and Edeva comforting him was lovely. Keep it up! |
| In Pieces chapter 2 . 2/1/2013 Lovely! Henry sure changed, it would take a lot of guts to move out from one place of another with the uncertainty of a safe lifestyle; in my opinion his older self in the book and movie seemed more calculated and centered. There's one thing I'd like to point out, I think you use too much periods in your sentences, a few comas and semicolons would be nice and would make the paragraphs seem less paused. Keep up the great job! |