I love so much your Maliver fanfics! You write them perfectly
Thanks

Beautifully written!

I adore this. It's honestly one of my favourite ever pieces of Firefly fanfiction. You've captured Mal's voice so perfectly, the rhythm of it, and the way he thinks. Just. Wow.

A River / Mal pairing seems strange yet believable - something Mal wouldn't be comfortable with, yet something he could find himself pulled into like gravity, no engines strong enough to hold him back. I'm not sure whether to wish him well or wish him luck - probably both.

Your ability to sock someone in the gut with so few words is amazing. Beautiful

compelling! Thank you...I love these two.

Mal always seems to be right on the edge, so this:

Don't seem to matter that he's all broken up inside, that he can't make sense of his own life cause that'd require too much thinking, and he's worried his mind is like his ship – go poking about too much in the workings, and it might just fall apart.

It sums him up so perfectly.

Very Mal. Sorry just can't quite come up with something better to say this left me speechless.

such a lovely look at Mal's faith (and lack there of) in God, in life, in other people, in himself, but most especially River. very impacting, for such a short piece. :)

Short and sweet! I loved it :)