Oh. My. Gawd.

That was amazing! I loved it! You write so well, I was able to perfectly imagine every scene! It's so... good! I'm speechless, really.

Great job, and ahah I love Final Fantasy X. Go Yuna&Tidus;! (:

Awesome, keep it up!

Forever & Always; Linda.

that was so beautiful. you captured the feel of the Yevon religion and the Final Summoning ritual perfectly. Ill bet you could write a great sequel to this about Braska's defeat of Sin and his death. thatd be absolutely awesome.

"Do you agree to become Sin. To become the vessel of Spira's atonement?"...O.O

Such a good fic! It is superb!

Facinating...Lovely imagery!

*eyes huge* Wow... That was... Scary... But really, really amazing description... I loved it.

hey man, this was EXCELLENT!

keep writing!

God Bless

that was really cool!

Absolutely wonderful! I found your fanfiction refreshing; its nice ta’ see that writers will take on stories that has nothing ta’ do with the two main characters being in love and such.( not that this is a bad story idea, just over-done a bit. Ya’ know?) Your writing style flows nicely and is simple to read… there are a few thing you need to watch out for though. I’m sure your wondering, such as, right? Well… your opening paragraph for one. You start off by saying, “A voice” It would be better if you just flat out said who it was and then described the voice and then described her. Now don’t take me wrong I’m not saying that your opener was bad at al , in fact it was great. It caught my attention! And that’s all it was meant ta’ do, catch readers attentions. Anyhow I just wanted to wish you the best of luck with your writing and ta’ tell you to keep up the good work.

Laters,

Keta

That was wonderful. Good descriptions. I *strongly* dislike Yunalesca, that EVIL, one thousand year old HAG!

Well, keep up the good work!

That was really well done, actually. It's almost surreal to actually have the mental image of Jecht as a fayth... usually it's just like "bla bla bla and Jecht became Braska's Final Aeon", but you actually show it. Good writing, too. Bravo.

Aah, interesting. That would explain the sword Jecht pulls out when he enters form two. Hate to nitpick but the Pagodas arent part of the aeon, they're Yevon's doing (they hang around your aeons in the post-final battles as well as Yevon himself, so they wouldnt have aided Jecht as he fought Sin). Otherwise, nicely written. You should write another chapter about the battle between Sin and Jecht and then Jecht's getting absorbed )

OH! I've been hoping someone would write a fic about this. Well written! :)

hey nice idea for a fic man! poor jecht tho, kinda makes u fel bad for him even tho he was a sucky dad. keep it up.

Yeah, I liked it too. I really doubt that the people who became the final Aeon really knew what they were getting themself into. ('Zu Risiken und Nebenwirkungen lesen sie die Packungsbeilage und fragen sie ihren Arzt oder Apotheker' *grins*... Öhö... nevermind...) Very nice, though.

Sugoi, sugoi, sugoi! What a nice ficcy! Poor, Jecht, though! *Sob!* And Braska! *Sadder sob!* Oh, ahem... ; Anyway, very nice, very nice!