This was so adorable!

This is so cute!

Is there any couple you can't write well? I don't think so!

Love it! (Even thought it's not Valentine's Day now) I shall add this story to my Jily community :)

Love love love love love. I love that Lily meant nothing was worse than Madam Puddifoot's, not spending time with James. I love that he misunderstood her, and their plans for the next year were off, and this was just adorable. You managed to write James as arrogant and obnoxious but still so, so sweet. "Easy. You," he said without hesitation. this. Just so adorable and happy and perfect.

I don't know what it is about Jily, but... I just don't feel it with them like I do other pairings, lol. It has to be really well written for me to like it. And yours was. You had them both in character, and I really enjoyed the little time jump too. I realised it was probably a time jump, but I did get confused a little at the same time, until you (or James) explained that it was a year later.

I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes, and I thought this was absolutely adorable. James tries, at least.

Well done.

oh my god! This is so cute! So fluffy! I love it!

That was amazing. Nothing else I can add. It was just amazing.

This is adorable :)

I really loved it, which is saying something considering I don't read much Jily.
I loved your characterization of lily. It's no surprise she wouldn't enjoy Madame Pudifoot's - considering what we've seen of it in the books, I can't think of anyone who'd enjoy it :P

The Marauders interaction was brilliant and fluffy and just perfect.

Well done :)

Glorious Jily piece.

James and Lilly, ah so sweet they're easily my favourite couple of the marauder era.

I didn't notice any spag errors and I think it flowed well. I like how well you kept them in character. I can't see Lily enjoying glittery hearts either and that bit at the end was so cute and James is incredibly cheesy. A well written valentine's day fic from top to bottom.

Aww! I really loved this. I also liked the touch where you started it with the 13th for one year and then jumped to same date for the next year. The gap didn't really leave me with any questions, everything was clear.
I really loved when James was complaining to Sirius, Remus and Peter about asking out Lily, that they knew the situation was no appropriate to crack jokes, and that they should just be there for their friend, I really loved that.
Admittedly when James said, "Easy. You." was a bit cheesy like Lily said, but I really liked it anyway. I also really loved how he assumed she detested Valentine's day because she turned him down the previous year, I thought that was really cute!
You also wrote this very well. No grammar or spelling mistakes caught my eye.
Overall this was a very nice piece that made me smile! I just love James and Lily.
Sorry this review was a little late!

Aaah! This line killed me, ""Easy. You," he said without hesitation." So sweet and true for him! I think people sometimes forget to give Lily and James likes\dislikes beyond each other and I love how you make her anti-pink\glitter and in favor of nature and a picnic.

The first half also establishes what James is doing wrong which is that he barely knows anything about Lily and that was very realistic since Lily wants him to go beyond the physical.

Canon James\Lily are sometimes hard to get since we don't really know either of them beyond hearsay and a few memories so this was a lovely way to see their courtship and evolving relationship.

Aww. :) Nice story, I love how you wrote everyone here- Lily and James were both perfectly in character, same with Remus and Sirius, although they were mentioned less. This was really well done, agaaaaaaain. :D

This was really cute. Though the change from James to Lily was REALLY confusing! You should have said something about a year later or something cause I was confused as hell until the endxD. Though that could just beme too, as I'm dense :P. However great story, I like how you started it with James trying yet again to get her to go out wit him xD. And the ending was really cute. Great job!