In love how grumpy he got!

Aww. Can you do another chappie plz?

That has to be the best fan fiction I have ever read about the Guardians.

Great story! I love the fluff and how Jack is running after everything trying to prevent and fix stuff and then just fall asleep because he is so exhausted. Oh, walking through knee-deep snow? I wish we would have that, but we haven't had snow in a year (unless you count sleet) and the year before that like 1 cm for a day *grumbles*

Cute story! I loved it! Great job!

Hilarious, fun, and so sweet and touching! You spun a great story.

Awesome story! Thanks!

Hee hee hee, oh, I wanted too see Jack out cold a sec from the exoplosion.. sooo tired, 3 amm but you have father/son North/Jack fic... must read.

I love Tooth sneezing fairies... priceless!

Awwwwwwwwwww such a sweet story

Jack's going to be sick next

As far as I know, Perkele is classified as the worst swearword in the world. It can mean from hell, to motherf****r. It's one of the only cuss words I use at home. Mostly because not one of my family members knows jacks**t about speaking Finnish. I love this story though! I cracked up when Jack said that Bunny was writing down a chemical recipe for chocolate while he said that they were resting. Do you really need a chemical recipe for chocolate though?

Adorable! I really love this fic. There are so many sweet moments and hilarious moments that I don't know where to begin.

I love Tooth in this so much I can't even say. When she sneezed fairies I almost died LOL. I also love how she reacts to being ill. She's still calling out and, at moments, seems completely dissociative. Even so, you don't make it overbearingly dramatic to a point where it could detract from the cute, upbeat nature of the story. It's hard keeping that balance without giving even the smallest sense of "crackfic."

Bunny is just... well, he's Bunny alright. I love the fact that you threw in some of his book canon. I didn't even think about that when Jack noticed that it was chocolate tea. This really gave us a sense of the living character feel that I've mentioned about your writing before. There is a lot about them that we don't always get to see nor have to be reminded of constantly—but when it comes out, it comes out. Also, when he guiltily pretended he hadn't been working neurotically on recipes... lol. What a brat.

I really enjoy Sandy in this fic as well. His three-headed dog and the rhinoceros were both hilarious. I'd never really considered how Sandy might act if he were "sick," and that is just brilliant. I also like that he is still the character that I love seeing him as: the reliable guy. He is the first to get better, the one who works through his illness, and the one who helps keep the others down when they needed it most. Thanks, Sandy!

North, once again, is fantastic. I love that he mandated everyone stay in to get better—and even assigned Jack as their "nurse" (lol). (By the way,I have the sneaking suspicion that he gave Jack nurse duty in the hope that he'd feel more helpful and at home. Jack's doubts and concerns throughout the story play in with this. Perhaps North was paying close attention and knew just what Jack needed?) The way that he later was the most rebellious against his own order was adorable and so like him. What are words when we have ACTIONS? Also, his card shuffling skills were a hilarious touch.

And finally Jack. Jack, Jack, Jack. His reservations and that desire to please the others isn't laid on too thick, but it's still present. It was sad and cute toward the end when he mumbled out his own feelings of guilt. Poor li'l guy! Oh yeah, and the part where elves begin pelting him with cookies? Amazing. Just saying. I think one of my favorite parts in the story is his reaction to the "helping" he is allowed to do for the yetis. I could hear his thoughts perfectly: "The amount of trust the yetis put in him was just so heart-warming." And to be honest... I don't blame the yetis one bit. Hah!

Once again, great story. I figured if I split my review by character, I'd remember all the little points that I wanted to make. c:

I liked the idea of rain turning to ice when hitting Jack's skin. I also like that you wrote in North's accent, some people don't bother, I think that you did pretty good with the accents. Haha, charging rhinoceros.

Finally managed to read this. Great job and super cute! I love the explosion and almost died in the food/ice fight in the kitchen haha! So funny. I also liked how Jack wiped out in exhaustion at the end. Great ending :) Oh, and Bunny's extra arm was hilarious, if not a tad disturbing haha Great job!