Well, I like what you have. If you upped the rating it could go further *evil smirk* but it's nice as it is. I love your descriptions, and the building of tenssion as the story moved forward.

First L/C fanfiction I read, and I must admit its pretty good. I must admit I was a Cl/C shipper *runs to avoid objects being thrown* but I think L/C is the way to be. Lex is sexy. Lex is rich. Lex is bald. :) Anyway, very well written fic, I love the game idea. I can't wait to go read more of your work! :)

someone once said, "leave them wanting more" make them think after they left, and this was very thought provoking, emphasis on the thought...hehehe...

*giggles insanely* oooh, that was perfect! XD hehehe... *collapses into giggles again* Clex is the reason boys were made!

This is very, very nice.

i like it.