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UPDATE PLEASEEEE PLEASEEE PLEASE UPDATE , I LOVE YOUR STORY/FANFICTION.

Im still waiting a update

Ugh please don't tell me this Naruto is going to be freaking the fuck out about not changing anything to alter things so he can have future knowledge blah blah blah . . . The Butterfly Effect is a thing . . . He's already fucked things up irrevecobly, it is essentially IMPOSSIBLE to not change things and trying otherwise will just cause a lot of worrying and annoyance . . . I cry

wtf

"Oh Dear Kami"

"Great Scott"

Is it bad I heard these last two lines in scottish?

Quite possibly nothing… Naruto just killed Fugaku before he ever had a chance to get Mikoto pregnant with Itachi… or at least I assume as much to be the case. It was certainly before the man sired Sasuke.

You know, usually it is the Hyuuga I accuse of having a stick up their arses, not the Uchiha…

Yeah… those two Jutsu are going to be hard to explain.

When she finished, he… he what? You missed off the rest of that sentence.

As an interesting side note, changing Naruto’s genetic structure, means that sleeping with Kushina (which is what she is obviously planning for), won’t result in any of the unfortunate genetic anomalies that would turn up in other incestuous relationships.

“Mikoto-sama”? As in “Heiress of the Uchiha Clan”? Oh this just keeps getting better and better.

You know… in the real world, using Kinobori no Shugyo in order to arrest your downward momentum while in freefall, would almost certainly have just cost Naruto that arm. There was actually a real world scientific reason that made it so that Superman catching people that have fallen off a skyscraper was impossible without killing those people… at least it was impossible until they went and retconned in that nifty “Bio-Electric Aura” that he didn’t have until relatively recently, and which is apparently ‘responsible’ for something like 90% of the absurd seemingly strength-related stunts he pulls off.

In other words, a real human body is not going to survive grabbing hold of something while falling at terminal velocity without having that limb being torn off the body. Now on the other hand, I am 90% certain that Naruto could have survived the impact, due to the fact that there actually HAVE been documented cases of people surviving free fall after jumping out of an airplane without the use of a parachute, and Naruto’s is going to be substantially better suited to such survival, due to the Kyuubi Chakra running through his veins.

Wow, Naruto… way to use your father’s pick up line on your mother… SMOOTH!

The Uchiha is the family that caused the most trouble… but also, with Naruto’s combat experience, even if he doesn’t manage to get three tomoe by that point in time, he will be a better fighter than Itachi is by the time of the Uchiha Massacre… that said, I did notice he is limited to a single tomoe, which means he needs to find out who his next closest kin is, so that he can gain the Eternal upgrade, once he achieves Mangekyou Sharingan, as otherwise this will be a pointless thought experiment.

Why not have naruto train Kakashi Obito and Rin?

the idea was good, the execution sucked, use of english was poor. it was kinda OP without the need to work for it. like most of your plot it was just because

fugaku gets the order to actack konoha, natuto beats sanbi, meets his madara who replaced the one from this world due to the shinigami fucking up, then he gets a baby and in a blink of an eye later he stands amit a burning konoha.
yeah that is some real good story dev right there

you talk to much, so verry little words are actually spend on the story i just gets enoying. well j should have know from your A/N so much words so littlr meaning. you need to learn to get to the fucking point

WTF

the amount of edge in this story made me almost bleed to death