This was some good shit, I applaud your skill in writing. clap. clap.

"No way would Asuna-chan give in to Kirito's dark lusts so easily!' Couch Cough 16.5 Cough Cough.

Holy fuck, this was beautiful!

The use of "Zero" as her name in her own thoughts is really stupid.

such an amazing, touching story. Great work as always.

I suppose it is a good thing that Derflinger didn't go too. He'd be totally hax in ALO.

Thank you.

Yui is so adorable.
That last fight...I don't even.
Good on Zero for breaking that net. I bet the ones in the real world will be scratching their heads over that. And they will never know that the deathgame is the happiest she's ever been.

This is a fun one, and well written. Thank you.
HalkOnline is awesome. I hope it will one day be completed.

Since I already commented on chapter 3 (in chapter 3) and this idea only just now came to mind. I have to ask. Any chance of a story detailing the travel's of the Legendary Zero, as she travels across her homeland? I would rather love to see what all she did in her travels. I also have to wonder what her family (or is it former family?) thinks of her too.

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Will there at least be a sequel with Zero and Klien in Kliens world?

This was an amazing read. At first I was a little sceptical with Klein as the romantic partner but you made it work. You managed to do in three chapters what some others are unable to do in hundreds of thousands of words: make me emotionally invested in the characters. Really an example of quality over quantity. I laughed and cried and just loved what you wrote. Thank you for sharing it.

I... oh my god, that is just... this is beautiful, there is no better word for it than beautiful.

Simply amazing. I hope for a continuation.

That was bittersweet and I love it. h