Reviews for Like Smoke
victoronice chapter 1 . 5/4/2017
I read this on ao3! You wrote it? Wow!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
I've read this 12 times already... Every time I cry... Thanks dude. :/
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I love your writing so much. The sex scene was handled excellently, so intense but not over the top.
Chimuwaku chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
I can't even put into words how much emotion this gave me. As a person who roleplays Hashirama, and someone who has a strong connection to him as my muse...

This portrayed him perfectly. This is Hashirama.
Hikari-chan-san chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
It's so sad. What's even worse is that I read it while listening to Ariana Grande Tattooed Heart.
Sam-Chan and Jason-Kun chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Sam-Chan: This fanfic is so addicting...
Yamiga chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
This is just the story I've been looking for! No long chapter, 100 or more review story, this story is amazing! I really like it, honestly, I've read many MadaraxHashirama stories, but this one is the best!
Pekudi chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Okay...this needs to get a review, even if I'm really tired and I guess it won't be a good one..sorry

But this is just a beautiful way of showing Hashiramas personality in all it's facettes...I need to appreciate this and I'm quite sure that this wasn't the last time I read this OS.
That's because everything makes sense this way. You managed to paint a picture that could really...be real. And I love that.
And if I think of the latest chapter I would LOVE to read how this Hashi would feel..then. And how Madara would feel.
But I wondered about that the whole OS. How feels Madara right now...And I wonder if he's angry when Hashirama kills him, because he said he loves him and...well I don't think Madara felt like the one betraying but was thinking Hashi betrayed him earlier and...well.
I'm sorry, I lost the topic but this just makes me think so much.
This really is one great work and I'm kind of sad it only has this one chapter...
Simply awesome!
Pekudi
Fellfire chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
-insert awe and amazment here-
Wow, That was much better than I was expecting. ;)
Well done! *thumbs up*
narusaku chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
The boy with the bowl cut smiled big. He continued on with eagerness. "And she's taller than me, too!"

His friend raised his eyebrows high. "Really?" He made a face. "But isn't everyone taller than you?" A rock was thrown at his head.

"But seriously!" He set his arms two feet apart. "They were like this big!"

"...Hashirama, don't you have other things to be thinking about?"

He let his arms fall beside him. "Like what? You didn't even see—"

The young Uchiha looked unfazed. "I bet she has an older sister." He sat on a big rock a few meters away from where his friend was standing.

He looked confused. "How do you know?"

Madara closed his eyes. "I just know."

"But how do you know?"

He glared at him. "I know everything."

"Pfft. You can't scare me with that pathetic glare." He busted out laughing. "You should see my serious face! Gets my brother all flustered every time," he boasted. He pointed to his face.

"Not with that haircut." He received a stuck-out tongue. "Which...brother?" he asked carefully.

"...Oh." He looked away. "My little brother...Itama..."

"Oh." Madara visibly regretted asking.

Hashirama was quick to take advantage of that. He turned away from him and squatted down, hugging his knees to chest.

"E-eh?!" Great. Now he'd made him upset. "You've got to control your moods, man!"

Hashirama felt a hand on his shoulder.

"Sorry."

"No, it's nothing compared to you...you lost four of your brothers," he mumbled.

"It's not comparable..." Madara said. "Loss is...loss."

"But you lost even more than me..." He looked up at Madara. "Don't you feel sad?"

"Not much anymore," he lied. "You just move on."

"Yeah, right." Hashirama scoffed. "That's horrible logic."

"What?"

Hashirama gave him a look. "If you lose four brothers, that should mean four times the sadness."

"..."

Madara rose his eyebrows somewhat in amusement. "...And my logic is horrible?"

"Shut up." A pebble was abruptly thrown at his face.

"Again! What the hell, Hashirama!" He scowled madly.

"Bwahaha!" His friend ran away alongside the river's edge, effectively avoiding the oncoming heavier rocks he received in return.

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QueenPotatos chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
I love you
Can I marry you?

(HUM more seriously...)
I'm so found of that Hashirama, just the way you painted him. This was perfect. I love how you included chapter 626 (cause that's just ...snif I can't talk about it yet T.T too painful) and that wasn't easy but it was clever and human, Hashi was just a very possessive lover.
Really thank you for that story, I was waiting for days for HashiMada to read t.t you're doing my day ( chap 627 too but, your story could)