Reviews for Unmei no Koe
Beautiful Obsession 17 chapter 5 . 10/2
Amazing story! I'm so happy everything turned out OK for everyone! the sex scenes were searingly hot!
Guest chapter 5 . 7/7
Wow.
Seriously wow.
That was the most amazing smut I've read in a really long time. I'm blown away. The emotion in it, and god the moment where itachi FEELS along Sasuke and Naruto was so fucking intense. And the phone calls. I think you had a realistic (and enjoyable) amount of voyeurism. I just really love what you've written here! (*o*)

I have to admit I find the part where Mikoto and Fugaku accept Sasuke and Itachi a little unrealistic to me but besides that minor disgression I absolutely ADORED this fic. You keep the SasuNaruSasu dynamic great while Itachi is such a complex character too. I know I'm gonna come back and reread this because holy shit. It's just wow.

Amazing work. I really hope you update this, even if it has been a couple of years.
kunf'you'z-ed chapter 5 . 1/24
I enjoyed this story so much. I loved reading about how Itachi struggled with loving Sasuke and how they both knew how they felt and were aware the other felt the same way but it wasn’t until Naruto entered the picture that they were able to finally all be happy. I loved the scene with Mikoto and how she went over how she felt about her sons and their situation. I’m just so glad that when Sasuke and Itachi finally get to tell their parents, they will be pleasantly surprised with how Mikoto and Fugaku will respond. I loved this story a lot, thanx so much, bye!
Mily-y chapter 5 . 11/29/2016
That's one of the best threesome I've ever read about ItachixSasukexNaruto! Intense, very well described (all the emotions that they feel in their own ways), also the details about Itachi's predicament and his job! I like the personalities of each of them. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this!
Tuesday'sHere chapter 4 . 2/19/2016
Fuck it I need to get my fangirling out here: HOLY FUCKING SHIT! Fuck that was... just... I can't even... AAaahahhhh! Seriously SIN is the fucking greatest thing ever fucking created and hot damn did you do them justice! I could so clearly see it and damn if I didn't have a mini orgasm myself! Absolute perfection, not just the sex which was fucking delicious, but the writing, the feelings, the chemistry was just there and it made that final moment so fantastic! It was great (it was realistic, they weren't perfect porn stars but the emotion they put into it made it absolutely amazing)... seriously I feel like I need a cigarette after reading that. Sorry if I am focusing on the smut too much, it was so well executed and written which must be very difficult to do in a threesome but damn you did pull it off! I enjoyed the story as well, I really felt for Itachi and it was so obvious the attraction between the three. Honestly props to Itachi (I fucking love him more than any other!) for holding out for 12 years but in the end it paid off for him.

Thank you, thank you so very much for this awesome, dirty, delectable, naughty, fantastic piece your work is greatly appreciated!
Jessirar chapter 5 . 4/21/2015
I usually never review stories. And by usually I mean definitely. Not even good ones that I like. That probably makes me a horrid fan. But. This story is just great. I even shared it with my equally depraved Ita/Sasu loving friend. All of your stories are great actually. And I actually like your smut, it's not too much but it's satisfying enough. Please continue this, along with all your others. You have real talent, I can see it. Heh, obviously, cause I'm reading it. You are one of the few authors I've found that has fully developed thoughts, spends time to emotionally connect your readers to the characters. Most think it's easy cause you're basically borrowing a character that's already been developed by the original creater, but I've seen so many would-be-great fics die because the characters are so 2 dimensional, and you've gone quite away from that. Good job!
the Moon our Witness chapter 2 . 4/19/2015
Oh my gosh this story is beyond lovely... I'm so happy to have discovered it. You do such a great job at putting their feelings in words, I can imagine it quite vividly.
Minervana1 chapter 5 . 4/4/2015
Love all your stories, you are an amazing writer. I just can't wait for the next chapter!
Xyra Kaze chapter 3 . 12/7/2014
Shame poor Itachi. Sasuke is being very mean.
Xyra Kaze chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
I feel really sad. I can feel my heart break along with Itachi's
Xyra Kaze chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
This is so very interesting! I absolutely adore it
Nanri K chapter 5 . 10/9/2014
Their love is so sweet and yet so wrong, butvi guess the wrongness of it keeps things interesting ;P
Awesome story, can wait for the last installment :D
Nanri K chapter 4 . 10/8/2014
Woah, this chapter was steaming hot. It has just confirmed that I have a thing for threesomes XP. Don't think me weird for my admittance. I really enjoyed your fic.
You were right, your work is so different from each other, I actually like that. The differences in your work eliminates the feel of "I've read one, I've read then All". Keep writing :)
Chronos guardian chapter 5 . 8/17/2014
A path not traveled often but done beautifully if I do say so myself. Nice writing.
kizukatana chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
WOW! A friend of mine recommended that I read this, and I had it bookmarked but somehow couldn't find it (I'm challenged, I know). Anyway, the first chapter just killed me. I have an insanely obsessive love for Itachi, and the Itachi you write in this story just makes me want to reach into the computer and take care of him. I am glad it is noted as SasuItaNaru, because I want Itachi to have them both. Usually the threesomes are basically PWP, but you have a theme here that (at least for Itachi) makes actual emotional sense. I am so impressed!
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