| Reviews for The Demon Bottle |
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Vi-Violence chapter 5 . 10/8/2009 nice! this is great! is there any way i can talk you into making a sequal? |
Rhona1 chapter 5 . 7/3/2003 Class story, it was great reading it! I loved the plot it was really good! _ Oh, and see Rahne's accent, it was quite good, cos most people when they do her accent they image her as if she were ginger and wore a kilt! But you didn't really insult her by changing every word, and i know what i'm talking about cos i'm Scottish, and you denney see me changing everyword! Anyways, amazing story! Bye, Rhona. |
Colleen chapter 5 . 6/18/2003 Oh that was great. Loved the mixing of an old spell with the X-men. Poor Kurt. Most loved the last bit with Rogue and her brother, nasty and fun. Wonderfull. |
Jyxxie chapter 5 . 6/7/2003 That was wunderbar! I loved it! It was really funny at the end. |
Miyo chapter 5 . 4/25/2003 XD LOL! Oh, I LOVED Rouge in this chapter, she is so good at freaking people out! Really cool! :D |
Wolfgirl chapter 5 . 12/11/2002 Ah LOVE it! Thats totaly awsome, epesialy the whole magic bit, clever of you to get that in there. the fuzzy blue elf is my favorite character |
kara chapter 5 . 11/15/2002 aww, i love this story, it's most definately my fav of the entries to nutty's challenge! it's very clever, i love how they resolve it all, and how rogue is able to intimidate sylvan with an ungloved hand even though he doesn't even know what she can do. overall, very well done! yay you! |
Rads chapter 5 . 10/9/2002 really cool story, liked it lots. poor Kurt- always getting into trouble and thats when hes behaving! hehe |
Goddess Evie chapter 5 . 9/25/2002 Yes! Very impressed by this story! It was so awesome! And Rogue as a SUCCUBUS! *giggles madly* Wouldn't Remy get a kick out of THAT! This was great, a hilarious read! I really do hope that you write more fics, because you definitely have a talent. Bravo! *standing ovation* |
Aden chapter 1 . 8/27/2002 HOLY COWPIES! That was so butt-kicking cool. You are now officially on my fave authors list. More yummy writing! Please! ~Aden |
Trepidatio chapter 5 . 8/26/2002 Very fun. Loved the incubus/succubus thing, very cute. |
Scribbler chapter 5 . 8/25/2002 Wha-heeey! That was one of the most interesting, incredibly well-written fics I've ever had the pleasure to read. Well done, and don't you dare change a *thing*! It's perfect as it is. Succint, good vocabulary, and thoughtfully written (God, I sound like my English teacher!) Although, I think I particularly enjoyed it because I know what Internutter's picture looks like. (_) Hope you write more soon, Luv from Scribbler _ |
Pantera Kedian chapter 5 . 8/25/2002 Oh, that was too funny! I loved it. Good storytelling, and I loved Rogue and Kurt's trick at the end. Kudos. I hope you write more like this! |
Pantera Kedian chapter 1 . 8/25/2002 Hey, this is cool. I've only read the first chapter so far, but I like it. I like the way you work the descriptions into the story without interrupting the action. That's very well done...not to mention the way its supposed to be done. And I laughed at the way Pat and Stephanie picked alternate names for themselves. It's so true! Good job on characterization, and the little Sylvan has a crush on Rogue and Rhave's jealous thing is cleverly done. I like this story. It's one of the more well done ones that I've seen on this site. You can tell you put thought into it. I'll probably review again when I hit the end of the story. I just couldn't wait to tell you what I thought. |
idsunki chapter 5 . 8/25/2002 It's a shame they won't remember the stunt Rogue and Kurt pulled at the end. I've already given you all the constructive criticism I can find at the moment, so just more of the same on that front. Guess I'll just have to file this one under "Wagner, Kurt" and move on as well. Auf Wiedersehn! -idsunki |