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Guest chapter 1 . 9/19 Entries not allowed: 1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc. 2. One or two liners. 3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story. 4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc. 5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As;, and etc. 6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries. Your chapter is not allowed under section 1 of the guidelines. You should be posting this sort of thing on your profile page and/or forum instead of here as it's not an actual story. This is a place for actual stories and not for you to announce what you plan on writing. MGTS of Critics United. |
OneUniverse87 chapter 1 . 7/29 I see that you decided to talk shit about me on your little forums page, huh? First of all, it has nothing to do with me being a homophobic, which I'm actually not, nothing against gays, I support them 100%, but that's not the point. The point is, what rules? The quote unquote "rules" that you and your little posse had made up? Let's not forget what you told your other boyfriends about me on your forums. "Did you here that, guys? We're turning this website into a dictatorship by trying to help get people to follow the rules they agreed to in order to post here! And that you have to own a story in order to say it needs to be changed because it breaks those rules. What sense does that make?" "Another homophobe maybe? And wow, we're the ones with the over-inflated egos when they're the ones bragging about their so-called talent? Talk about arrogant. If they don't want the suggestion to change their stories, they should maybe follow the rules from the beginning, unless their reading comprehension is that lacking to the point they didn't know what they were agreeing to when they posted." And your behaviour regarding the review sections does not change those around you, it defines who you are. If I were you, I choose wisely. |
bleedingangel95 chapter 19 . 4/15 Ho-ly shit 0.0 Well it seems the trend for things not staying hidden affects tifa as well o.o |
chaosmoon75 chapter 19 . 3/23 It has been so long now that I not sure if you plan to continue this work, if you do look back on it and decide to pick it back up I would be excited. This is a well told story and I would love to know the answers to so many of the questions raised and still not answered. |
Embrosa chapter 19 . 11/10/2017 Hi, I know you must be crazy busy with your life (going from your bio). But I hope everything is well. I, along with many others, have been long awaiting your next chapter, but i can understand how a busy life can get in the way. I'll wait as long as it takes to read your amazing story. Hope everything is well, and thank you :) |
AnimaQueen chapter 19 . 9/25/2017 Oh my word! The cliffhanger. Please continue I'm await that a steamy scene with genesis and tifa. Update soon |
Lucif.C chapter 1 . 8/25/2017 I'm so curious how Seph will react if Tif told him the truth, I enjoy the spark between Seph n Tif and also same as the romantically bubble between Gen n Tif, its so interesting, Please update... |
Guest chapter 19 . 5/19/2017 Fuc******ing hell seph know seph KNOWS OH MY GODS SHE GONNA TELL HIM? EvERYTHING? I JUST CAN IMAGINE THE GENESIS FACE WHEN HE DISCOVER he gonna be relief? or feel betraits? please continue this |
Guest chapter 19 . 5/18/2017 oooo please continue with this fic it is the best in all fanfiction please don't abandon us update pleeeease |
Kagayaku chapter 19 . 4/29/2017 Oh my goodness! What a cliff hanger, I can't take it! I really do love this story; I can't wait to see what happens next! I have one little constructive criticism. I noticed that you use the same LOVELESS quote repeatedly and it's kind of lost it's effect, but LOVELESS has a lot of good lines in it. Maybe mix it up a bit :) That being said, I love this story and I can't wait for more. Thank you! |
FlawDiamonds chapter 1 . 3/12/2017 Honestly adore this fic so much, always written with great flow and character development/relationship progression! I just keep re-reading it until the next update comes out (which I hope is sometime soon!) Thank you for writing such a phenomenal piece. X |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2017 It was a bit weird how Tifa out of the blue told Rayleigh sensitive information about Jenova. A real ballsy move. Also wasn't really a fan of how long the 'kidnapped and rescue' arc was going on for. Everybody seems to do the 'Hojo kidnapped main character to perform horrifying sciency stuff' thing and after the 5th FF7 story it just starts to get ridiculous. It's popular for a reason, though, so I guess everybody but me just really likes it. Other than those two things this story is pretty decent and I kind of want to know what happens next. Especially with Sephiroth dropping the bomb like that on her. Now that's just pure evil to keep us waiting in suspense with that little scene. |
Stella Limegood chapter 19 . 3/1/2017 I LOVE THIS! LIKE I LOVE THIS! PLEASE KEEP WRITING! I LOVE THIS! |
Guest chapter 19 . 2/25/2017 Seph knows! HE KNOWS! LOL OH YEAH, NOW THE FIC IS GETTIN GOOD! lol. Oh lordie lordi lord. Why? Do i feel like Tifa is gonna have a ton of suitors after this? From Reno to Zach, to blasted bloody Cloud hell i wouldn't be surprised if even tseng , angeal, seph and hojo (the gross out) himself will want her! ...poor Rude. Poor Genesis. It's gonna be an all out who can win the fair lady's hand match of the century! Thank god Aerith is alive to help "feed the fish" lol! P.s. a new couple never done before that might be cute to add to your story is a Cloud and Cissenai the turk couple? Not sure why but during the other chapter where they had to save the cadets and with your writing, i dunno the pair just clicked in my head? What do you think? |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2017 STOP TELLING PEOPLE ABOUT YOUR INVENTED RULES! THERE NOR ULES IN THIS SIGHT! LEAVE REACTION STORIES ALONE YOU BASTARDS |