Reviews for Subject Alpha
Eternity456 chapter 3 . 7/16
Please update this it’s awesome
Stratos263 chapter 2 . 1/18
Good luck naruto, Laura, and sarah
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 1/18
Good job on the start
Natsubi chapter 3 . 6/14/2017
Well then... And to the person that commented before me, naruto has a total kill count of 1-3 in the cannon show, what ya got to say to that? That's counting all the movies too btw
sexybutcreepy chapter 2 . 3/12/2017
I find it hard to believe he doesn't kill he was raised to kill.
chapter 3 . 2/8/2017
Not sure but was that galactus' daughter
AJGuardian chapter 3 . 12/1/2016
There arent many who possess the Power Cosmic. I have a clue. Thanks for the last chapter.

Now then...

What's the point of following this if it's freaking dead.
AJGuardian chapter 2 . 12/1/2016
Wow. I notice now the gap from your last update until now. You dead or something?
That would suck...
AJGuardian chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
This is fking nice.
From what I understand what you did with Laura and Naruto, when she is exposed to trigger scent...
If she is subdued by Naruto, she capitulates. Basically she recognizes the "Alpha" between the two of them.
She could possibly, in the future, build a romantic interest in him if they live or work close to each other for extended periods of time.
Just a thought I wanted to share. Good start so far saving the Doctor. Having her could be a good influence for Laura. Needing a mother figure she never had. Now here she has it.
tamagat chapter 3 . 11/12/2016
is this fic still alive?
tamagat chapter 2 . 11/12/2016
I JUST CANT GET ENOUGH!
MY GOD MAN!
how do you make this?
tamagat chapter 1 . 11/12/2016
THIS SO GODAMN AWESOME!
ITS INSANE!
chapter 3 . 9/24/2016
You should update this awesome story
chapter 3 . 8/23/2016
Update please this is one epic story.
chapter 3 . 8/18/2016
No update in the near future
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