This is brilliant and there needs to be more.

Fantastic story, I would love to see Tim getting an arc like this in the T.V show.

I know it wouldn't fit in with the current season but I would really like u to make this into a real story because I feel like Tim never gets enough attention and this seems like a really good story. Please think about it. Thanks

This is really good! Part 2?

Love the story, hope for more.

this is good. you really want to keep this a oneshot?
would be great to see some more shapters or "sequels".

I feel like this could be turned into a really good fiction, kinda disappointed that it's just a one-shot.

That was incredible! Amazing!

I come back to this story often. I just love it.

...why did you stop...aww thats mean, i wanna jnow what happens next! are this his dads people or a foe, when its the later will his dads people find him soon enough? will he come together with Gibbs soon? 22 years away from jome ...i dont think that his father has not some eyes on him when he is such a big boss...

please please come back and write more chaps, i really wanna know how it goes !

I still hold a faint hope that someday I will log in and a sequel will appear. Of course, you have several other fics I'm following as well, so I'm admittedly greedy. :)

just so very neat I like how Gibbs took it calmly

YOU totally have to continue with this! IT'S amazing! Is there more!?

Interesting.

Real interesting background you made for McGee. I hope you continue with this.

Keep on writing.

Please continue with this story please.