This is another great story. My only nitpick is that the relationship between Ranma and the two girls did seem a bit rushed. That was one of the reasons why you're a third path to the Future story is one of my all-time favorites on fanfiction is because you had Harry and his women become acquaintances, then form a friendship which we could see evolve, and then finally form a romantic relationship. You're one of the few authors who really knows how to make a harem story work in that story because you didn't just suddenly have grills just decided that they were going to fall in love after only meeting a person one or two times. The only time something like that works is an anime like sekirei were there is an actual explanation of why women with fall in love with someone so quickly. The relationship with Ranma and kanu is fine because they really do have so much in common. It just seems that some of the other girls are falling from a bit too easily. But that's just me and besides that the story is great though. Keep up the good work.

this relationship went wayyyyyy to quick

Thanks for the enjoyable read. You mentioned the idea of the Kan'u and Ranma moving from one story to the next. It sounds interesting. Which order did it go? Since it looks like you have all the choices in your story collection.

Thanks!

Good story. Keep up the good work.

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Corrin

ok so what happened to Hakfu and her cousin?

You know, now I'm wondering what would happen if you put Ranma in the To Love-Ru world or Soul Eater. Possibly Boku no Hero Academia.

this story kicks ass, awesome story idea and blending of the two universes

So I'm a little terrified of how powerful Ren probably is. I mean Ryofu is head and shoulders above every single (canon) Fighter in the region, but you said she's significantly weaker than the average Ryofu. Which means Ren has to be some kind of monster.

Ren was probably incredibly strange and very memorable to everyone in her time period, considering her insane personal strength, her bizarre personality and the fact that women like her just didn't exist back then... When I get to the sequel, I will be very disappointed if there isn't at least one incident involving a super-old yokai recognizing her.

I should probably mention how absolutely hilarious it is that her entire contribution to the dragon fight was her throwing her spear at it once, and then spending the remainder of the fight searching for said spear. It's also kinda character-establishing for her, in a good way. She may be a monstrous combatant, but she's clearly one of those "Common sense, what's that? Can you eat it?" people. A condition that will be severely exacerbated by her 1800-year time displacement.

Yes, We do need more harem male protagonists written by authors like you. It makes things more interesting and unique.

why even leave someone like Kaku alive as the instigator of the entire kidnapping and leader of the group shouldn't she have been killed along side her minions she just tried to get a girl raped does she turn good later on is she important to the story?

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hey cool story. I really enjoyed reading it. hopefully the next book in the series will be good as well.

This one was better.

I'm sorry but this chapter's spelling was just all over the place and awful, I think one of those monks had his name changed three times during and after his fight, not to mention the grammar near the end almost dropped out. I hope this isint a theme as we get closer to the end.

"And everythin' the Monkey King's father put him through"

What story is this? I'll grant I'm only halfway through the first book of The Journey to the West but as far as I can see the Monkey King, Sun Wukong, has no father. You know, what with being born on top of a mountain from a magical stone egg or some such. So I'm guessing this is some other version of the story?