| Reviews for The Anomaly Within |
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Sabeloid chapter 9 . 1/21 official head canon continuation of the series |
Ohgress chapter 9 . 10/4/2015 You should get paid for this story. That's what I think. This isn't fanfiction. This is professional writing. Thank you for all your hard work! |
Guest chapter 9 . 12/22/2013 Please say this isn't all? This is Lester at his best, and some of the best writing on this site. |
Rubytronix chapter 9 . 7/1/2013 Wow! Utterly brilliant and although I'm sad we won't get more of this- I can understand why! So difficult, and so clever! Well done, you! I hope you're going to write more fics, though... You're a fab writer! |
Rubytronix chapter 8 . 7/1/2013 This is amazing. So clever. I'm so gutted for poor Connor. I so hope things work out, but I've got a really bad feeling about this... |
Rubytronix chapter 7 . 6/30/2013 I'm loving this so much- it's exciting, a bit scary and heart wrenching to watch Connor behave like this! Lester was wonderful, of course! |
Rubytronix chapter 6 . 6/30/2013 Loving the way you write the characters- really in keeping with the actual! Fab chapter! |
Rubytronix chapter 5 . 6/30/2013 Feeling so sorry for Connor- it must be terrible for him, but if anyone can come up with a solution... Brilliant! |
Console chapter 9 . 6/30/2013 I liked your ideas and your research was excellent. My theory is that “our” Primeval is set maybe 2 years in the future from Primeval New World. The problem is that Connor et al know that the PNW operation was a disaster and went wahoonie shaped, but they can’t do anything or tell them because, and here is the time paradox bit, they didn’t do it before, so can’t now without changing the timeline. |
GeorgiaSkye chapter 9 . 6/30/2013 Have loved this follow up to series 5. It addresses a lot of the loose ends. The characters are written well and I would love to see it continue when you have time. I agree with your thoughts on New World! |
SandyLee Potts chapter 9 . 6/30/2013 Fantastic story, I'm kinda sad to see it end. The best bit has to be Lester - shaking Connor out of his stupor. Well done. |
Animiga chapter 9 . 6/30/2013 I loved this story and would love sequels. Even if it's less detailed and more theoretical/fictional, the emotional and character development that you put into the story is absolutely wonderful and something I'd love to read more of. |
Moriarty's Cat chapter 9 . 6/30/2013 To be honest, I am very disappointed that you are not continuing this and trying to explain if Connor's theory is right, and who the other people from the future could be. This is very well executed and excellent storytelling (despite some spelling/grammatical errors) but I feel a little cheated to read that this is it with no resolution having got invested in a decent story (a rare thing on here) . Sorry. I do appreciate how much time and effort goes into creating something like this - when I write a multi-chapter piece myself it can take months to get right. |
Fairepeacock chapter 9 . 6/30/2013 I am amazed at the level of complexity that you have I this. You have done a wonderful job and I look forward to he next "episode" |
Bookworm690 chapter 9 . 6/30/2013 This was AMAZING! All the work with the research and planning was definitely worth it, in my opinion. This is definitely something I could see happening if the show had continued. Thank you! |