| Reviews for Independence |
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ebfiddler chapter 1 . 7/29/2013 You had me going there...the second half was a surprise. You nicely captured the essence of DC on the Fourth. Now, all I can wish for is more Rewound. (Pretty please!) |
Dmarx chapter 1 . 7/12/2013 Finally got around to reading this one and I love it. Especially the way that I spent the first half thinking they'd broken up. Sneaky sneaky you! And I agree, the DC fireworks were pretty amazing! Diana |
lkwill39 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 Great story! Enjoyed it! |
msTGR chapter 1 . 7/7/2013 Great one-shot. Thanks to your writing, I could totally see them in my head (which is not a surprise anymore) and actually feel a little better about the hiatus and the S6 possibilities. So, thank you! |
conservativegirl chapter 1 . 7/6/2013 Great story! Very sweet:) I also went and checked out Liberty, I loved it! |
3rdfah chapter 1 . 7/6/2013 Nicely set up, then perfectly delivered. It seems to me that to avoid this pathway, Kate needs to be offered a promotion within the NYPD comparable in responsibility and/or pay to that in DC. Be that as it may, you've delivered a very nice slice of a different pie. |
rr-atl chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 "Where else would I possibly be?" Awwwwwwwwwwww...love! :-) |
firerosedreamer67 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 nice take on season 6...Thank You! |
Elle018 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 Beautiful. Thank you. |
GT500RonSmith chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 Super happy that he went with her, but not happy she decided to take the job! |
jazoey chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 That was beautiful. You really had me for a moment, I didn't expected Castle to be there! |
brookemopolitan chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 Guh, you had me going. I thought she was all alone, but then you saved my poor battered heart that is simply not coping with the lack of certainty and you just made my babies okay and GUH. I'm not articulate right now, but I think that's because you blew my mind. In other news, you can totally tell you're writing about your home city. I can feel the love, which is very cool :D I want to celebrate the fourth of July now. How does one do that? |
Mark C chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 This was wonderful. You did an excellent job in showing how Kate was getting use to DC. The ups and downs for her were present as Kate thought about how she was settling into her new jobs. It wasn't until Rick appeared that being in DC on the 4th was going to be okay. To me, it appeared that Rick being there with Kate has made things a little easier for her. I do wonder if Kate accepted Rick's proposal even though she is wearing the ring on a chain instead of her finger. The ending was sweet as they watched the fireworks together. It was made even better with what they said to each other at the end. Excellent job. |
VACastleFan chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 Great story! You had me thinking she was solo for a wee bit, and then Castle makes a typical Castle entrance...wooohooo! And yes, DC does do fireworks pretty darn well! It is a bit sad to see the Wash monument all sheathed in scaffolding, but I confess that the Lincoln is my fave. Hope you had a nice 4th! |
1822andallthat chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 Ohhh the visual of Beckett stuck in boring meetings involving role-play! Priceless. What an amazing writer you are. Such beautiful words. Bright and efficient, they're fireworks in their own rights. |