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WatsonandMary4ever
9/25/08 . chapter 1
A great story. I liked the part where Wesley was explaining things to Angel.
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9/14/02 . chapter 1
I really think you captured Wesley's tone and speech cadence, and that British stiff-upper lip-ness shines through. Makes me weep for poor Wes all over again. However, I wonder if Wesley would consider Angel thinking he was a traitor to be a "more devastating truth" than the truth that Angel might kill his son. I would've assumed that the latter was more devastating to Angel, which is why Wesley did what he did. But however you interpret "Sleep Tight", this is a lovely story. Good work!
lonely Brit
9/14/02 . chapter 1
Oh. This was sooo sad.

But very lovely.

Great job. I can just hear Wesley saying those things,and I think you hit the nail on the head by having him tell Angel that he's much rather Angel hate a traitor than himself.

Thanks for a great, if sad, peice of writing.
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