Well, I like it, but the Japanese seems a little bit much. I hope you continue though.

ACK! gomengomengomen! I didn't realize you'd reviewed to tell me something. Sorrysorrysorrysorrysorry! I hope you can get into character...eventually, ne? I understand, though. I've had writer's block for months, though no one reads my stuff anyway ^_^ Sorry, again!

I think I remeber seeing on your bio page that this fic has been abandoned. WHY? Okay, so you only got 13 reviews, but I promise I'll tell people about it! I'll advertise on my bio, in my fics (when I *do* update)! PLEASE ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER! I know, I know, it's pathectic, but I haven't found a single other *good* Saiyuki mpreg, much less a *Sanzo* one. *whimpers* Please rethink your abandoning of this fic? *please*? *teary eyed*

Hey Blades. I'm trying my hardest, yeah? It's hard to write right now...can't get into character...and I can't really promise anything...

UPDATE! I love this story! I wish to read more very much, de gozaru yo. Please, PLEASE add more!

Ano...will you be updating anytime soon? Ever? I really like this fic, and it's the only Sanzo mpreg I've found. I like mpregs. Especially when it's Sanzo. You might now have a lot of reviews now, but if you add another chapter, the fic will be at the front of the list for Saiyuki, and more people will see it. PLEASE add another chapter! This fic is very well written and interesting!

PLEASE update REALLY soon! I really like this story, and I am in dire need of a new chapter of something to read. I have over 20 fics in my favorites, and only 1 has been updated today! I really, REALLY wanna find out what happens next!

Wow, I really like this story! It isn't like the few other mpregs I've read though. I've read 2 Rurpouni Kenshin ones, by Imbrium. They're very funny. But I like this fic too. I hope Sanzo keeps the baby! How the heck will he give birth, though? I have 2 ideas, but I wanna know how you do it! Please update again REALLY soon!

Ah. Why is he is so much pain? Cause it's happening so fast? Yay! Now I actually know who the characters are. Well.. off to find out stuff about Brazil. Later

Bis (haha)

So far, nicely done. Almost believable. And Sanzo is so well-drawn, right down to the threat of the datai-sensei.

I personally also appreciate the accompanying translations. My Japanese is very rusty.

Now, do you have more? And where is it?

He he! I knew it! Sanzo is pregnant! You definitely MUST continue this! It's a must! The public demand it! ^_~ Wonder if Sanzo will end up keeping the "baby", it would be just so cute! Please more!

Aahhhhh! Continue! ::grins:: (... and I'm going to resist cackling and yelling "PREGGY FIC!". Because it's probably something a lot different. I'm just obsessed, ignore me.) Anyway- really well written, with directly on character stuff. ::dances:: S'good! MORE! PLeeeeease?

heyy... this is really well written. I remember your first fanfics.. you keep on improving with your writing. This reminds me of something I read once.. they ( whoever they were) were talking about fanfiction and how some were scarily and extremely well wriiten. Your fanfic is exactly that!

If you wanted , you could probably write books about shows or whatever when you get over ( you know... like those Buffy books i read.. those of course not like those too).

Since I know what's going on in this story...i have a question... why did the old woman drink the water too? And was she coming out to get the water because of the reason I think?

Me... Love

Bis

AHHHH! how could you do a cliffhanger!write more now!

*grins* Oh, yes, I can't -wait- to find out what will happen to poor aching Sanzo-sama...

*whap* Itai...

One of the more interesting Saiyuki reading material I've found in a while. Most of the fics here are Romance, *twitch* and those that are adventure often have poorer content..

Word choice is nicely descriptive, I haven't heard any words used like that in ages. ^_^ It looks to be a good fic, *adds to Favorites* so do not get lazy and not update! (A habit I ned to break myself of...)

Ja!