Great! Please continue the story.

Please continue this story. It's really good. Like your storyline is amazing and your writing is really good (trust me). I'm just want to know how you tackle the team meeting Ziva again :)

Love the fan fiction so far and can't wait for the next chapter.

Greeeeat story! I love how it contains the emotions/reactions of the other members of the team too, not only Tony's, like many other fics. (Not that I don't like Tiva...)Unusually for me, I don't even find anything to complain about so...good job! Hope you update soon!

Please update

UPDATE! UPDATE! PLEASE UPDATE!

OMG! I'm having a moment! I love that you are making this about Ziva and the team, not about Tiva . I am a Tiva shipper, but I'm one of those shippers that likes the individual more (especially Ziva:). I'm in love, and I think GG should take a leaf out of your book! Thank you!

This is a very intriguing storyline, and I think the most realistic I've read in terms of what would happen after Ziva leaves. I love all the characters different emotional responses, particularly McGees, Vances and Gibbs, who I don't think were covered much in the show itself or in any other fan fictions. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and the future of this story and I'll be looking out for updates :)

I think your handling their emotions pretty well and I can't wait for more . I'm very excited.

Ziva working at the zoo is such a refreshing idea! You make it work so well. And the little recording was a nice way to see how Ziva was faring.

I love this story. I like how your plot line is different. It isn't how tony goes to bring Ziva back, and i love how you've assessed the other characters feelings on Ziva's goodbye. I cannot wait for the next chapter x
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I'm on the fence with this chapter. I don't like the fact that you have Gibbs mad at her. It doesn't fit with the end of the second episode of the season when he recieved the phone call from her, he was more sad than anything. Other than that, it was a good chapter and i' m hoping Tony isn't the next target.

Vance actually has no power over Ziva now that she has resigned and it is rubbish to say that she cannot just leave - yes, she can - it is just a job. He cannot demand that she returns to DC to work with NCIS on their latest case and she would have been well within her rights to refuse. If she is returning, it is because she wants to, although I think she is a fool. It is clear that Vance seems to hold her accountable for the attack that killed Jackie Vance - even though it wasn't her fault, and Vance should be ashamed of himself for making Ziva risk her life on some quixotic mission when she is trying to make a new life for herself.

What a great story! I can't wait to read more!

Your idea of Ziva working with animals is very smart . Poor Gibbs he really feels bad for bringing her back and she seems to be happy and carefree . But is she ? I mean she in love with Tony and NCIS is her family after all . Can't wait for next chapter.