Ack! Add another chapter. This is so good. Rikash is one of my favorite characters and, well, romance happens to be my thing. Would you please update? Even though it's been over two years? This is really good.

-Black Heart

Update your damn story! Please.

I just love how you wrote your fanfic in the Stormwing pov, and how you integrated the Immortal stories! Update soon if possible!

get your lazy ass in gear! )

come on rose flame! i has been wating 6 MONTHS for u to upload! wots the hold up?

Well.
I could tell you to get your lazy ass into gear, or, i could tell you late merry xmas, late happy new year and very nice fic. AND, that Chrissy's flying over to brissy. if your not interested in that small fact, *sniffs* i shan't ring u when i get there. *grins*
Brilliant btw, despite the long, long, long space inbetween updating but u've had school so i understand. lmao.
anyways,
bye raven,
Chappy/Chrissy.

ive loved ur story sofar. pls try to update b4 the end of my holidays

It seems a bit strange, not unlike the way that the new Star Wars movies are of a different tone than the original trilogy. Still, it's something!
Keep it comming! :)

Woohoo! You haven't given up on it! I was starting to worry. I mean, not that I can talk, but anyway...
_ The Rikash/Zircah is so cute. So we're coming up to Realms of the Gods now aren't we? *dances* Wootah!

You updated! _ YAY! I was begginging to think you had gone and ... died, or something. . I'm ever so glad you aren't. :P

*pokes* C'mon! Update! *keeps poking*

YAY! You updated! _ I always like reading that sceane over and over again in the book. Ozorne finally gets his just desserts. Can't wait for the next chapter. _

Yknow, thanks to you I think I may have a reputation for being an annoying pesterer on the net now P

This was really good and I'm so glad now you'll really enjoy writing this next bit. It'll definitely show in your writing. Zircah/Rikash! Woo! *can't wait*

~Wyrr

I just have to say it. Spoky! -_-

I'm glad the Banjiku are in this. They're cool. Good chapter Rave, it was short but effective. And besides, we all know short chapters precede long ones

Poor poor Zircah. It looks like it's all up to Rikash.

...

They're doomed.

~Wyrr

It's WONDERFUL chapter!

hehe poor rikash *grins*

Please update soon, sorry it took me so long to review I havent been on for 2 weks...

lovely story. Truley lovely.