what do you think about ash getting his gibble early and training it along side his lavatar

Please update

Please Upload another. Your story is very good and I love the interactions between Ash and his mons! :)

Really disappointing to see this hasn't updated in years. It looked like it had some real potential. The fluffy moments brought a smile to my face and the action was pretty good. It was a while lot better than some other fics I read where they just emotionlessly call out attacks the whole fight. Ash and his team being badasses was also fun.

Hope to see you come back to this at some point. Or at least post some of the other pokefics you've talked about.

this is just utterly wonderful and I would really love to read more of this so please keep this up and update it again soon!

You say this is your story with elements of 0Jordino0. I say this is his story with elements of you. Good story, but it's HIS. Most of this story is a 90% copy of Working Sinnoh With Skill! Please come up with your own concepts. This story is actually MORE popular than his story. That's insane.

Get his older and more overpowered Pokémon on the team

This is a great story and I really hope to see you maybe continue it along! Here is to hoping for some more wonderful pearlshipping! My favorite! Lol

update it

I have to ask if you've decided to abandon this story or not, because I'm thinking that you've been doing a fantastic job with it so far.

I like to point out that Staraptor does not know Gust but instead Whirlwind. Seriously, I read this story so many times that I can remember this story pretty well. And I miss that this story hasn't been updated. There aren't many Pearlshipping stories out there especially with quality like this. The only other one I know is Jordino 'Working the World with skill' story but that hasn't been updated either.

update. to quote yourself, I wish he'd update the darn thing.

This is amazing. Keep up the good work and please update soon

"Dawn riding [Ash] like a ponyta"... *Sigh*, the directions that my mind goes.

Not all that important, but Eevee and all of its evolutions are fox-based Pokemon - not dog or cat-based. And personally, I would have preferred an Espeon over an Umbreon, though the latter would probably be my second choice. More than the fact that I love Espeon slightly more than Umbreon is the fact that Gary already has an Umbreon, though that doesn't necessarily mean that Ash can't also have one. Also, I think he should have kept the "Vee" nickname. It reminds me of The Pokemon Adventures manga's Red's Espeon "Vee" (the Eevee that could evolve into any of its currently available 5 evolutions at will and then devolve back into its original form only to repeat the process, before eventually permanently evolving into an Espeon), and I really loved that Pokemon.