Good chapter. Write more soon.

Good chapter. Write more soon.

Great chapter as always, Rick. Glade to see a tie-in to Matt Wagner's "Trinity" mini-series. Keep it up!

Love the story. But your information about Red Kryptonite is incorrect. red K has existed since pre crisis times. it is a form of Kryptonite that was exposed to different radiation than the other colors (which include gold, white, clear, blue, and many others). It's effects are typically random and often very strange, it has been known to do everything from create an evil twin (like te fake K in superman 3), to causing supermans hair to grow uncontrollably. The Red K Batman synthesised was actually based on a piece of Red K that he found before Superman could come in contact with it. he then made a more powerful synthesized version. Just felt I'd let ya know. Keep writing though, I'd love to see where this is going.

Cool chap. Please continue.

Great continuation; I especially loved your alternate reasoning for how it was that Luthor was able to pass J'onn's mind-probe. Keep it up!

I like the story, as I like your other stories, but I have to stop reading this one here, on Chapter 11, due to your liberal use of the abbreviation "thru". It is spelled "through". "Thru" is not a word. I'm sorry, I am a crazy grammar nazi, I know, but that happens to be one of my pet peeves. You are obviously a very talented writer; I'm sure you can do better.

You continue to outdo yourself Rick. I am totally captivated by this fic. The scenery that you are writing is superb and your characterizations perfect.

I can't wait for more.

Got a kick out watching Batman's plan unfold.

Rick,

This story is FANTASTIC. The writing is superb, the dialogue perfect, the scenes to die for. WOW! I love your characterization of Batman and Wondy. You deserve a lot of praise for this fic.

Nice to see Luthor's plans had wheels within wheels. Even nicer to see Batman can still jam up wheels with relative ease.

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Particularly liked Batman's last line as well.

Wow, you're getting scary with how deep this fic. This is what the summer crossover for DC should have been! Politics, action, intruigue, and light romance. Great job and in an election year as well! :) Keep it up!

This is an awesome story. I can't wait for an update.

I may have said it before, but I'll say it again:

This is how Lex Luthor should have been removed from office.

You're doin' a fine job. Keep up the terrific work.

SO glad to see you writing this again! Great job and hope to see another chapter soon!