A bit rushed at the end, how Lupin succumbed to her so easily. But. Overall, its nicely written, and it makes up for the time between that Bill scene in the hospital and Dumbledore's funeral, where they were together.
Good job.
berryboom

Aww, that was adorable! I love Tonks/Remus!

Awww! thats all i can say... its was sooo... awwwwwwwwwww

no!no,your GOOD at writing romance!that was awsome:)

very cute

tonks wins

you're really a very good writer!

I like the story, even the "corny pathetic ending" )

Ruki

I love this! It's so cute and sweet, and fluffy, and so totally LupinTonks! It is a brilliant one shot and right now I'm just about to go check out EVERYTHING you've ever written... D

Rosey_

Great. ] Really good story. I don't know what you're on about, saying its not that good! P

Sometimes we *need* a corny ending. And the story was lovely - they just seemed so...themselves. I could see this happening. Loved the part about closing a door, breaking a window, just sounds so Tonks-ish :)

Corny?

NO! IT WAS WONDERFUL!

I loved this piece. LOVED. Fantastic characterization of both of them. And nice vocabulary, too! Verbose...garrulous...big words.

My favorite part was definitely when Remus went on that whole little ramble- 'twas adorably in character.

The pink hair change was a little drastic, but other than that there's not much I'd change.

The anecdote about the broken window added to the piece. Plus I love the idea of Dumbledore knowing. He's the kind of person who'd pick up on something like that.

The ending is not corny nor is it pathetic. It's beautiful.

:-D i really liked how you didnt even mention remus' scars until he mentioned it himself. Hehe. Tonks certainly didnt focus on it cuz he was "incredibly sexy". Ooh, and the bit about him calling her by her first name and it sounding more like a flower than "a fairy on drugs." Haha. i really liked your fic. keep up the good work.

LOL! Your author's note made me laugh quite hard, you know. As did the "incredibly sexy" line that she really hoped she didn't say outloud. I think you did a great job writing romance and hope you do it again in the future. I know how much you look forward to technicolor werewolf cubs ;)

thanks for writing and posting!

Aww! This was so cute! I was trying to write something similar to this, but it just wasn't coming to me! lol. Very good! It wasn't cheesy (or overtly cheesy, everyone was still in character and most of the cheesy things actually happened so it was okay *smiles*) Anyways, I think a lot of people on who write romance have not had romance. We're all in our own little world here...lol. Who needs a real boy when you can have REMUS?

sweet:)