 BellaBlackFinally 9/15/06 . chapter 5I hope that now Nathan fills the pain that he has been causing Haley for the pass three years. I hope he now realizes how much he needs her and wants her to stay with him and their children.I feel really bad for saying this but I hope that everyone does learn the truth about Nathan and loses Haley and that he relized that the women that he 'loves' last feeling toward him is hate.
Its a really good story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. |
 Bleeding Crimson Regret 9/15/06 . chapter 5I love this story. You're really doing a great job.
And one other thinng: A story you started wrting called 'Crimson Rivers', I was wondering if you were ever going to continue with that. I read chapter one and thought it sounded interesting, so...It's just something to think about. ;) |
 snowbabie 9/15/06 . chapter 5i am soo glad you updated... and i say WOW...very powerful ending...please don't kill her just yet, if at all...please dont end it that way...and please update really soon! ~Snowbabie! |
 Micki90 9/15/06 . chapter 5I love this story, you have to UD soon! |
 brutus 9/15/06 . chapter 5 Nathan has no right to abuse Haley, but I can't believe that Haley had an affair. Your husband being gone because of his job is not a vali excuse. I wonder if her sons are even Nathan's. I hope that Nathan and Haley can somehow work through this, though I am sure it will take time. |
 Fieldhockey 8/30/06 . chapter 1i'm dying to find out more on this story! |
 snowbabie 8/24/06 . chapter 4WOW...i really hope that you update soon...now it's sort of understandable why Nathan snapped (besides the fact that it has been in the blood-line for all these years - Great grandad and gramps and then dad) not that spousal abuse is the answer EVER but anyway, i like where you are going with this story it seems really good...I hope you will update soon...I can't wait to see if she cheated or if Nathan just "misunderstood" and hopefully he gets some MAJOR help! Keep up the great story! ~Snowbabie |
 E-rizzel 8/18/06 . chapter 4One word.
Update. |
 Doveangel1213 8/17/06 . chapter 4ok this is seriously getting freaky everytime i am going to sned you a review asking and pleading with you to ud becuase i love ur story so much, ud. it has happened twice. the last two times i said to myself i was gogint o review but u already did it. anyway. this was a wonderful cha;pter as the rest have been. now what did nathan meen. i don't believe haley has actually cheated must be a misunderstanding right? cause haley would never do that. like if hse had jsut did that then why would it be so hard for him to say it. anyway this was a really great chaoter i already said that but i love this story soo much. i think i have already told you this vut i am also jamesgurll23 on i really love your wtritng and i love your other story that have out too. please please UD SOON! |
 Fieldhockey 8/17/06 . chapter 4this was so great please update sooN! |
 iftheyonlyknewthetruth 8/17/06 . chapter 4at first i thought nate was just abusing hales for no apparent reason. maybe he feels compelled to do it because he justifies that because hales cheated on him, that he can get away with more than just hitting her. i sincerely hope that nate is wrong with saying hales had an affair, because otherwise are the kids his or not? and if hales had an affair, who was it with? please continue when you can! |
 lizzieloo 8/17/06 . chapter 4wow. very intense story. but so good! please please please update soon! I cant wait to find out more about haley cheating and everything |
 piecesofwhat 8/17/06 . chapter 4I really like this story. UD soon. |
 NaleyScott23 8/17/06 . chapter 1Omg, this story is really good. poor haley i feel bad for her but i hope she tells lucas and dan so they can help her and the kids get out. update soon! |
 Fieldhockey 8/6/06 . chapter 3my heart is pounding, such a good story, please please update alot and soon! keep it going! |