This is a really good story...Please update!

this is really good but its really sad at the same time. i hope it ends happy =(... please update soon though i really love it

Dan? reeaaly? can't wait to see what happens...poor kids...ok i know what the youngest boy' sname is but what is the eldest boy's name?

poor haley! i hope lucas comes in and saves her. i can't wait to read more, so please update soon!

so nates pissed about something, so we shall see what happens! please continue when you can :)

this is really good. it's really sad, but good, continue and ud soon!

wow. thats some good writing i hope you continue. i must say the thaat nathan kinda reminded me of an evil dan espeically when he was talking to dillian

This story and makes me want to cry but I like reading it because it's unlike any other NH story. If Haley hadn't changed Nathan, I could see him acting like this on the show.

i read your story on ezboard too. i am Jamesgurll23. i am obssed with your story. it is really great UD SOON!

i think its sweet that hales son somwehat understands what his dad is doing to his mom, i just hope that when he fully inderstands what his dad does, that it doesn't take all of his innocence away. please continue when you can!

gosh nathan is evil keep updating i cant wait till lucas shows up!

Okay, let me say this, I think your idea is great and this is defintely a first, you know the whole Nathan being abusive thing. I will continue to read however, I don't know if I can really ever think of Nathan being this abusive to anyone, but that's okay because this is all make believe. I think you have a very unique idea here and I think you have the talent to do wonders with it, so you've got my support. Please update soon!

~Britt~

this is a really sad story, but i will continue to read it!

i love this story. it's different and it's edgey (sp?) anyways i love how it's not happy go lucky and it's not a fairy tale. though i would change it to M just in case anyone complains and flamed you because it does have consiterably dar themes...two thumbs up!

Yes, finally a story where everything isn't perfect in Nathan and Haley land. I mean, they are cute but it's nice to see something different go on with them. I don't know if you are taking ideas, plus, it's just my thought that it would really be interesting if all of their friends thought everything was great between them...please continue.