*laugh* I can't believe you gave us that kiss in the last paragraph. I WAS NERVOUS THIS WAS GONNA END WITH NOT EVEN ONE LITTLE KISS

*throws kudos at you*

~"We're not going to be interrupted again." Then he kissed me. And it was everything I was hoping it would be.~

*throws all the kudos at you*

Derek finally admitting that Chloe made him happy made ME super-happy. I want my silly, worried bb to get everything and more.

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ahahahahahaha Tori, bb, you just made my day. I was actually wondering what she was going to do with the phone but this level of planning is just EPIC.

The whole scheme is epic. Derek is just so stubborn that he gets an epic battle plan because .won' .

Poor Derek, didn't get to kiss the girl

Poor me...SIMON UNINTENTIONALLY RUINED IT, LET ME SEE THAT KISS PLEASE?

I laughed

~I was surprised when she stopped by my desk with a big grin on her face. "This plan is epic. I can't wait to see what he does."~

I laughed some more

~Derek paled a little. "Oh… Does, uh, Tori know?"~

Then I felt sorry, so very very sorry

~"I highly doubt it. I've never seen him this mixed up about anyone. I've known him for ten years. He doesn't date. He's never even seemed interested in anyone before. I'm not entirely convinced he realizes other people exist." he paused "I think what he hates is the way you made him feel. Not in control."~

And finally *blush*

~"Yes, well, like I said. I think he just doesn't know what to do. I saw the way he was looking at you tonight. He was eating you with his eyes."~

Bless you, I love your writing style so SO much. THANK GOD THIS STORY IS COMPLETED. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT'S NEXT! 3

HOLY HECK DEREK, THE SHEER LEVEL OF IDIOCY...

DEREK, STAHP.

*facepalm*

He really had it coming - thank you Chloe for letting him have it. (lol, 'you didn't come to work out at the regular time' that's priceless, was he actually expecting her to? *double facepalm*)

They're so adorably awkward, bless you for writing them like this.

I think I just had a squee attack. 3333

Awwww! Loved That Ending! Great Story! Totally Loved It! :D

At three I just giggled

He's being nice.

Wow. Derek acting civil? That's gonna take some getting used to xD

This is so cute. I'm loving everything.

Watch out, Chloe.

Interesting. I haven't stumbled across this AU before.

Ha, loved it! Your characterisation was amazing and I'm already hooked! :D

Awwwww man. its over alreadyDX?
Loved this story kept their personalities similarly to the book XD Kootos