| Reviews for Naomi's Turn |
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mavic chen chapter 1 . 12/21/2013 This is not a review for this. Sorry. I'd like to say something about that Doctor Who crossover, Of Gods. Was Davros telling the truth? He's a villain. Not everyone says the Doctor would be awed by Q, and anyway his old standby, as it puts it, was first uttered in 2006, Doctor Who's 43rd year. |
skadoo chapter 1 . 9/25/2013 I enjoyed this thanks. Not enough Naomi stories on FFN. |
Peryton chapter 1 . 12/4/2011 I love this fanfic! You did a really good job with it, although I can't help but wonder if Seven would have just allowed Naomi to get out of the Cargo Bay without any trouble. |
chill13 chapter 1 . 7/28/2011 That was really cute! I knew that little girl was smart but my goodness. She's brilliant. It's interesting how you've got her inheriting empathy from her father. They never said that in the show but I could completely believe it. She was very tuned in to people. I really wish they had had more scenes with Naomi and the Doctor together. She's so cute and even when he's annoyed he just can't show it around her. I really liked this story. |
one.twilight.sun chapter 1 . 4/30/2011 I liked this! It was very cute how Naomi worked it all out to be with the Doctor. The lengths she went to do this were ingenious! It was believable to the degree that one could forget that Naomi was around and she could just observe everything that was happening. I loved the part where you put "check with a smiley face" and entered in other points to show we were still with a 6 year old. I have a question though-are K'tarians really empathic? |
tiamat100 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011 That was brilliant! I love Naomi and the ending made me laugh. This is very well written, too, and you capture Naomi brilliantly. I love the idea of K'tarians being empathic. And her cheering the Doctor up! |
cflat chapter 1 . 1/19/2011 Nice chapter. Naomi being an empath is an interesting idea. |
PhinalPhantasy chapter 1 . 1/2/2011 Very well done. I enjoyed this one. Are Ktarians empathic? If so I must've forgot, but I really enjoyed this and it's based on one of my favorite Doctor stories. |
Tomutionmyha chapter 1 . 1/2/2011 I love Naomi stories, I like the idea of her being empathic, it would have made some interest episodes. I'm not sure she could have stumped the crew so easily and she definately deserved a worst punishment (lying, stealing, tampering with ships systems?) but I enjoyed it and would like more. Okay so she's empathic, will her powers get stronger? How does the crew react? How do her lessons with Tuvok go? What did her mom have to say about it all and why did they keep it a secret? Why was Seven so distracted? Why didn't Tom and B'E answer a command summons to a meeting? Sounds like the first chapter to a longer story! (hint, hint!) Thanks for sharing it! |