LOL, that was so hilariously awkward! And I loved how you made fun of Sparx's red/ pink fur! YES HE WAS PINK WHEN HE WENT TO FREE ANTAURI! XD
Sorry, I'm on a sugar rush xP

Lol This one was great! I like simple fics

I actually think he was one moment pink in that episode...Power Ranger Pink, at that, all that was missing was the skirt.

Did ya know that Power Rangers RPM have the exact color scheme of the Monkey Team from the first two seasons?

"Sprx's almost-pink color scheme."?
are you kidding me?
HE WAS PINK!
HE WAS POWER RANGER PINK!
LOL I will NEVER get passed that XP

This was so adorable. :)

Funny, that was the episode I saw most recently. xD

It's been a while since I've had anything to do with SRMTHG, but by the end of this I was grinning like the deranged maniac that I probably am ( I am up at an insane hour after all). Nothing to say as far as grammar or sentence structure, of course, but I will say that although I do like your put-big-blank-space-at-the-end-for-the-sake-of-drama-and-as-representation-of-Sparx's-thought-processes idea, as a reader with poor vision, I nearly missed that "maybe", my eyes automatically jumping to your author's note at the end instead. And it was only after reading that note that I made myself look up at the end and I actually found that "maybe."

So here's my maybe: Maybe if you put more white space between your note and the end of the fic?

Love this Net! I forgot how much I love your Spova stuff, and your portrayal of Sprx in particular is soooooo awesome. I love the bit about him being pink, hehehehe. I never thought about how Sprx and Nova would have spoken post-Ghost in the Machinder (SUCH A GOOD EP!) Aaaaaand yes. This was awesome. More awesome writing soon plz and thank you!

~RobotMonkeys4Ever, One of the Great Mysteries of the Universe

This is most definitely one of the more confusing fics you've put up. I had to read through this several times before I could finally piece together what is going. The punctuation is extremely choppy and makes it hard to follow any train of thought, detail, or speaker. I'm almost positive that's not what you wanted to do, although Sprx does seem to be the main speaker and does have some sort of concussion so maybe it is.

You write Sprx as a blunt narrator who tells us what is going on more than not, but that kind of narrator makes this scene all the more confusing because he clearly doesn't know what is going on, so how can he tell us about it? His confusion over the fact that he was about to "confess" to her is very awkward as it takes a dramatic turn towards humorous which I was not getting the vibe for at the beginning of the fic.

I am truly sorry but there isn't much I find redeemable in this story. You know I usually love your fics and you're one of my favorite writers, but this story seems too incomplete and rough.