my god that was amazing i was reading till my eyes hurt once i got to chapter 14 i had to give myself a break cos i couldnt decipher the words any more. i want to say more but im afraid of giving out spoilers to those who havent read this yet so thanks for an amazing story i loved every minute.

wow so emotional...i dont mind if theres no climax sorta thing to this ill still enjoy reading it and it does sorta feel like its simply a story about life theres no need for more really but whatever heheh its already finished it doesnt matter what i say

ah I love this chapter to pieces! he met his soulmate yea i had a feeling he would and was waiting for it so yay!

It turned out great, sorry i normally like to review as much as possible but with this i just dont wanna stop reading long enough to review hahah

that was so sad i wish you could of let him visit sooner but then i suppose this would of been a bit different. you handled the emotion of it very well at least i think so i dont handle that sort of thing well in my writing though i am trying to improve it...next chapter time now heh

That. Was. AMAZING! all that detail with emotions an stuff was just. amazing...

next chapter time!

Heheh i loved this chapter i was really tired when i started it and was just about to memorize where the page bar thingy was when that wing business popped up and i was all O.O and suddenly couldnt stop reading question time though does Riku only being half ylfe effect his lifespan it hasnt been mentioned yet. just curious.

oh wow that moment between Riku and Sephiroth was amazing! I hadn't expected that.

the soap opera thing you're worried about...I haven't been watching the things i hate soaps but i liked the bit you were worried about so dont worry it wasn't too sappy or anything.

now on to the next chapter

thats ok dont worry about making rikus mom nasty i have only read about 3 stories so far where he has descent parents. and i liked this chapter i like the way you wrote the characters in this fic. anyway on to the next chapter

oh i love this already i'm glad it was completed before i came across it it means no waiting heh heh

I cried so hard when Riku had a vision of his father dying! I knew from there he's going to die. This chapter made me felt like I'm actually there or it is because someone in my life recently passed away.

Been a long time since you finished this fic, hasn't it?

You did a good job with this story and I'm glad you shared it with me and many others. It wasn't perfect but some moments still carry strong emotions. :)

Thanks again _

Amazing! I love this chapter! The descriptions are awsome! Mad Seph is so scary! x_X *hugs Riku*

Cool~ The explaination wasn't too lenghty at all U, the mad Seph is still in here! #_# All is good and ahahah Cloud is Seph's cousin XD

ahaha, guessed it :p I was hoping for a more cool Sephiroth but ah well, for a father of 3 (?) this is good XP I did imagine Sora to ask more questions about Sephiroth's appearance, goofy as he is..